Tracking Time and Chaos: Days 5-7 of Our Wild Adventure

9 months ago
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The introduction does not effectively catch the audience's attention. To improve, a more attention-grabbing start could be added, such as emphasizing the increasing challenges or teasing a surprise event.

On day five they made a sign-in sheet Which was really just an elaborate trick What is this You have to sign our sign-in sheet Oh these are our camera people Yeah this is everyone that's come in today Wait a minute You're having them do this so you can track the date And the time Hold up I need to borrow this No no no I wrote the date I wrote the date Which I gotta say was pretty smart But by the time we got to day seven anything considered smart was thrown out the window Bailey's lost it He's whipping the pork Yeah I bet he's thirsty to the chance Five more throws But I only need one Let's freaking go baby

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