this platformer demon took me 3 days (The Gus Needle)

The Gus Needle, top 22 platformer as of recording. I'm fine with most of the level, but there are 2 rooms with big chokepoints that really brings my enjoyment of the level way down. If the difficulty was more spread out rather then consolidated in those rooms, it would be good.

Level:
The Gus Needle by Nyan Cat and Breedpineapple
ID: 98387162
https://gdplatformerlist.com/#/

Music:
Mad Muppet - Chill Pills (DjD)
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/111702
My Discord Server: https://discord.gg/cy9ptFM