The Unspoken Financial Crisis We Need to Address NOW

8 months ago
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The video introduces the topic of unpaid commitments and national debt, but the hook sentence could be more attention-grabbing. The coherence is lacking as it jumps between different commitments without clear connections. The video could benefit from a clearer introduction, body, and conclusion to ensure completeness. It lacks a personal connection and could provide more unique insights on the relevant trend topic of national debt.

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