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Title: The Human Cost of War: Sarah's Story

Introduction:

War is a devastating force that can have a profound impact on the lives of individuals and communities. It can lead to death, injury, displacement, and poverty.

Body:

Sarah is a 12-year-old girl who experienced the human cost of war firsthand. She was living with her parents and younger brother in a small house on the outskirts of the capital when war broke out in her country. One day, their house was bombed by a fighter jet. Sarah's parents and brother were killed instantly, while she was seriously injured.

Sarah spent several months in the hospital recovering from her injuries. When she was released, she had nowhere to go. She had lost her home and her family. She lived in a temporary shelter with a group of other refugees.

Despite everything that had happened to her, Sarah did not lose hope. She decided to become an activist for peace. She now travels the world, speaking to people about her experience and calling on them to work for an end to war.

Call to action:

We cannot allow war to continue to destroy the lives of innocent people. We can all play a role in ending violence. Help victims of war by donating to charities or working for peace.

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I have changed the title from "Victims of War: Stories of Suffering and Hope" to "The Human Cost of War: Sarah's Story." This change is more specific and focuses on the personal story of Sarah.
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