(25) The Critique

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Chapter 25: The Critique

My Adi led me to one of the seats in the giant circular stadium with a dome covering. I was seated where the angels were sitting during my appraisal process. Surrounding me in the stadium seats were other people whose sins the Victor had pardoned. Some of the people were wearing crowns they had received from the Victor.

After everyone had filed into their seats, the floor of the stadium opened up a circular gap. A man emerged with a generic face, as if his identity has been erased, and was escorted by an angel with a flaming sword. The giant crystal globe lowered from the ceiling. It seemed to function like a viewing window similar to in the same way as the appraisal process. Then I heard a loud echoing voice, “We will now critique your temporal war crimes and will determine your fate”.
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In the crystal viewing globe there was a moving vision of all the bad choices the temporal war criminal made in his life, their repercussions throughout all history, and a critique score for his life. The critique score was a negative value that only got worse, never better. The people in the stadium made an ominous gasping sound at each of the moments in his life where it was evident that he exhibited the deeds of the flesh which are immorality, impurity, sensuality, idolatry, sorcery, enmities, strife, jealousy, outbursts of anger, disputes, dissensions, factions, envying, drunkenness, carousing, and things that that.

I was surprised that the small acts of cruelty that he thought would be insignificant during his life were actually considered to be some of the worst deeds in his life. It was as if each small act of cruelty festered into a gaping wound, and I saw its corrupting effect spread into an infected limb that needed to be amputated. I never realized how the smallest act of cruelty could have giant rippling effects through time resulting in the death of millions. I saw how he never considered himself to be a murderer, but his acts of cruelty indirectly caused the deaths of many people. He sabotaged other people’s lives to elevate himself. The people’s lives he sabotaged were destroyed, and all the starving and impoverished people they were helping got sick and died. The cycle snowballed like an avalanche resulting the death of millions throughout history. The resulting critique score was an extremely large negative number that was completely terrible.

Then I heard a loud echoing voice, “Since you have shown no mercy, no mercy deserves to be shown to you. Therefore we will have you choose your form of punishment. You will be given several choices, and whatever fate you choose will be sealed for all eternity. You will not be able to complain about your fate being selected unfairly since it will be the fate you choose. Your first option is to plead guilty and be thrown into the eternal lake of torment, and you will be punished by having your crimes inflicted back upon yourself for all eternity. Your second option is to plead insanity and be sentenced to outer darkness where you will be quarantined from everyone, where your madness will never again be able to infect anyone else for all eternity. Your third option is to gamble for the Victor’s mercy. The Victor will flip a coin a thousand times in a row, and if it lands on heads every single time for all thousand coin flips, the Victor will show you some form of mercy. If it lands tails any of the thousand coin flips, then you will have your punishment increased sevenfold. Choose wisely because you will not be able to choose again, and your choice may haunt you for all eternity. You may now speak you final words and make your choice”
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The war criminal then said, “The Victor’s mercy and grace are without limit. The Victor does not sentence anyone to eternal torment without them choosing to be there. The Victor does not sentence anyone to eternal banishment without them choosing to depart. No one who hopes and trusts in the Victor’s mercy will be disappointed. I therefore choose the third option to gamble for the Victor’s mercy”.

In the crystal viewing globe there was a vision of the Victor flipping a coin and calling out the result, “Heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads,

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads”

After the first 100 coin flips, the man’s disposition seemed to change to one of hope.

“Heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads,

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads
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heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads”

After the first 200 coin flips, the man’s posture seemed to straighten, and he seemed to be more alert.

“Heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads,

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads”

After the first 300 coin flips, the man put his hands behind his head and seemed catch his breath.

“Heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads,

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads
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heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads”

After the first 400 coin flips, the man put one hand on his head as if he needed to think and take it all in.

“Heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads,

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads”

After the first 500 coin flips, the man seemed to freeze as if praying in his mind.

“Heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads,
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heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads”

After the first 600 coin flips, the man’s lips seemed to be moving as if praying audibly.

“Heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads,

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads”

After 700 coin flips, the man’s posture seemed to go into a prayer position.
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“Heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads,

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads”

After 800 coin flips, the man seemed start to tune everything out but his prayer.

“Heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads,

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads”
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After 900 coin flips, the man seemed to be in a trance of intense prayer.

“Heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads,

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads

heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads, heads…”

After 999 coin flips, the war criminal held his breath hoping that this wasn’t some cruel joke where the last coin flip would come out tails just to ridicule and torment him even more…

“Heads!”

The man gasped in relief and then jubilantly exclaimed “The coin flips were rigged!” The Victor then said “Of course the coin flips were rigged! Neither I nor the Creator play dice. Probabilities are for the ignorant who still haven’t realized that we ensured the game has always been rigged from the beginning. The only thing we didn’t rig were all of your free-willed choices”.

The man seemed to do a victory dance singing praises to the Victor and to the Creator. With a loving smile the Victor then said, “You final words were well spoken and full of wisdom. My mercy and grace are without limit. Everyone sentenced to eternal torment arrives there by his or her own choice. Everyone sentenced to eternal banishment does so by his or her own choice to depart. No one who hopes and trusts in my mercy will be disappointed. My mercy will now take the following form. You have abused your freedom and been irresponsible with your temporal life, so someone else will now be responsible for your eternal life. Now everyone in the audience who has earned a Crown of Rejoicing may choose to use a portion of your eternal wealth to purchase this man as an eternal slave. His life will be returned to him, and you will have complete authority over his soul for all eternity”.
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