COMIC TIMELAPSE __ Molotov(s) in '33 -- College Thesis | Page 25

Link to full chapter:
https://molotovsin33.thecomicseries.com/comics/1#content-start
Total time: 17 min 54 sec 43 sec

This page took a literal second less to finish than page 24. I'm also not impressed with the dialogue on this page, since there's a better way to re-word everything but I couldn't figure it out at the time. I want dialogue to belong in a noir film with that quick, easy to read style and something worth reading, such as "Killer in the Rain" by Raymond Chandler or memorable quotes such as in Double Indemnity. While outlining and scripting the official story, this chapter is now the fourth where prior iterations had it remain as chapter 01. This thesis is an adaptation of the final short story I wrote in Story Fundamentals: Revisions. Once the fourth chapter is finished, the dialogue will have a better direction because there's continuity to work off of and updated characterization.

Everything was drawn in Adobe Photoshop, edited in Adobe Premiere and 3D models made in Autocad Maya.